Web Design Critique #5: Aaron Storry Photography

by on 23rd June 2010 with 15 Comments

Every week we take a look at a new website and analyze the design. We’ll point out both the areas that are done well as well as those that could use some work. Finally, we’ll finish by asking you to provide your own feedback.

Today’s site is Aaron Storry Photography. Aaron is a photographer in Northamptonshire and today we’ll be looking at his online portfolio.

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Aaron Storry

“I’m a professionally trained and highly experienced photographer located in Higham Ferrers, Northamptonshire. My expertise is largely in wedding photography, portrait, landscape and candid situation photography, however I’m also highly experienced in HDR (High Dynamic Range Imaging) & Tilt-Shift. My background is largely in creative design which has helped me produce photos to suit a variety of media and audiences.”

Here’s the home page of his website:

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The Good

Right away I can tell that I’m going to have very few negative comments. It’s a nice clean design that’s both very effective and attractive.

Minimalism with Purpose

The design of this site obviously fits into the minimalism category. There is very little color, few visual distractions, and fairly small typography. Here minimalism is not simply a manner of taste, but actually serves a utilitarian purpose: It makes the photography the hero.

The effect of reducing the prominence of all of the supporting graphical elements serves to promote the importance of the photo slideshow. Since Aaron is a photographer, this is conceptually perfect for this site.

Navigation Area and Image Border

The vertical navigation is a nice choice for this layout. Some usability nazis might cry foul but I’ll insist that most users possess the brain capacity to know where to look if a site’s navigation isn’t contained in a horizontal bar along the top of the page.

Another nice touch is that the navigation area is fixed while the main content scrolls. This is perfect for image galleries where you scroll quite a bit but still want to be able to change categories quickly.

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I also like the subtle border around the main slideshow. I’m a sucker for little design details like this, they just make the end product seem much more finished and intentional.

Image Hover

If you dive deeper into the site, the thumbnail images have a nice animated hover effect. The dark bar at the bottom raises and covers the image with a button to view the pictures in the set.

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Areas to Improve

As I said before, this site is quite simple and very well done, so there’s simply not a lot that I would change other than a few nit-picky items. Overall, the design is spot on and I think the developer has done a great job. Just to be thorough, here are a couple small changes to consider.

The Client Login Button

There is a button directly under the navigation area for clients to login. The problem here is that the button isn’t displaying properly across browsers. As you can see, Safari is squishing the button so that it is barely large enough to fix the text.

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Rather than attempting to fix this so that it display consistently, I’d abandon the default browser button altogether. It simply doesn’t match with the page aesthetic. Instead consider styling it to match the rest of the content. Below is a quick mockup of what I mean.

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Where’d the Fixed Sidebar Go?

After playing with the site I noticed that on the page where you need the fixed sidebar the most, it’s suddenly gone! As I said above, this feature really makes the most sense on a gallery page where there is lots of scrolling.

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I vote that you keep the site consistent by freezing the sidebar in place on every page. This will make the site easier to navigate and more predictable for the user.

Your Turn!

Now that you’ve read my comments, pitch in and help out by giving the designer some further advice. Let us know what you think is great about the design and what you think could be stronger. As always, we ask that you also be respectful of the site’s designer and offer clear constructive advice devoid of any harsh insults.

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Comments & Discussion

15 Comments

  • Clervius

    Great suggestion about using an image instead of the browser default button for login.
    I Really like the minimalism. It makes sure that everything that needs to be seen is seen. My only issue is that though this is a great effect on the thumbnails, maybe you shouldn’t have that box sliding up on the big image on the home page. It’s kind of a loud effect for not too important of a reason. If all you want to do is tell the user there are a certain number of images on the album, you can probably have the box come up 25% of the way instead of all the way.
    Great website!

  • http://aaron.storry.co.uk/ Aaron

    Hi Clervius

    Thanks for the great comment! I was battling with the home page for a while, I did consider removing that slider altogether at one stage!

    That being said I’m going to look at changing how far the slider comes up! I agree with you that it shouts too much now I’ve gone back to it.

    Thanks again!

  • Chris M

    It’s a lovely portfolio site for a photographer. I love the minimalism and the focus it places on the images.

    I think on the gallery selection page the button on the animated roll-over should match the design better. The blue button seems to stick out in a design where the only colors are black, white and red.

    Other than that I didn’t notice anything you hadn’t already.

  • http://jenvasseur.com Jen

    Wow, what a beautiful photography site. I completely agree with your edits and don’t see anything else I would even think of changing.

    Also, I am enjoying your weekly site review series, looking forward to next week!

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  • http://knowledgecity.com Jae Xavier

    very interesting critiques.

    I often would ask a group of non-enthusiasts to critique the site like Sam from accounting, Mary from finance, John the janitor, or my kid sister.

    Non-enthusiasts give a different type of feedback vs. industry insiders. They call it as they experience it.

  • http://tintation.com Vladimir

    Well, The idea looks good, but the little extremely bright links on the left lower side are just too hard to see. Also, when I roll over the big image some freaky and ugly numbers show up… What’s up with that? People don’t care how many photos or sets you got, keep it for yourself :)
    Also, since you are making it such a short website, then make it a little shorter so there wouldn’t be any scrolling bar showing up on my computer, because when I scrolled down, there was nothing important.
    I do like your little logo with AS letters, that’s awesome and unique :)
    Sorry if I was too honest, I just want you to know what popped in my head when I saw your site – Aaron Story.

  • http://www.webcertain.com Bryan Sutton

    For a bit of printing material this would be some fine design.

    Remember this is the internet a new set of rules have to be taken into consideration, Besides from good design you have to consider SEO, usability and user experience .

    You need more content if this web site is going to work, it’s all very well to get approval from your fellow peer designers, but we should not be you main motivator it’s your customer: Like Tracy who is getting married soon, how will she find you? I just checked on google these keywords ‘Photographer in Northampton’ brink up a lot of competition and I believe a customer will probably choose a competitor by the time they get to your web site. take a look at this guy http://www.danielnobre.com/, he is marketing himself and keeping design integrity it can be done loads of content, people do not mind scrolling these days, so use all that space below the screen, and a creative linking footer would not go a miss too, check these out here for inspiration: http://patterntap.com/tap/collection/footers

    Like I said content is king (text or image ) and good content too for user experience and search engines…

  • Mr. Proper

    In addition to what Chris M said about blue button, I’d suggest making whole thumbnail clickable. You can get rid of the buttons and use freed space to write some quick descriptions of linked galleries. Who are those people, where the whole thing happens. This would add some interest for anyone viewing.

  • http://aaron.storry.co.uk/ Aaron

    Thanks for all the feedback, really useful stuff!

    @Mr. Proper I really like the idea of having the square clickable! I don’t think the design would loose anything

    I’ll get working on seeing how that feels in the site!

    Thanks guys

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  • http://www.chopeh.com Pete Lacey

    I’ve always liked this site, and this is a good honest critique.

    With the suggestions here I think It’ll be near perfect.

  • http://aaron.storry.co.uk/ Aaron

    @chopeh Thanks Pete!

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